Wednesday, August 27, 2014

Essay Week 2: Orientation Week Proofreading Assignment

Although I have not received my corrections, I found the proofreading assignment from week 1 to be decently easy. I have always done really well with spelling and grammar, and love these types of assignments. I can’t think of any rules I did not apply as I did the assignment, but I definitely had some confusion over the assignment. For example, I was not sure whether to capitalize God/Goddess, or whether there is a special rule for when to capitalize those words. I was also unsure of when to capitalize other titles, like president or king. So, I will need to brush up on that.

My main goal for this semester is to let my imagination run wild and create stories that my fellow classmates will find interesting and enjoy reading. Another goal I have to better my writing is using the word “that” less in my papers and to make sure I use a consistent tense throughout my paper. For some reason, I have a problem with switching tenses throughout my writing, and desperately want to improve this error. If I am unsure of where to find an answer, I look online at academic sources or ask someone who knows. For example, if I have enough time, I take my paper to the writing center for advice and critique. I also have a good friend who majored in English, so I ask her for help occasionally, as well. If I could give myself advice for writing, it would be to really proofread. This means, finishing the paper at least a week prior to the deadline and going over it many times. If possible, I would also have other people proofread the paper so that they have the opportunity to catch mistakes I may not have caught. Finally, I need to check my papers for the use of contractions in formal writing. I don’t expect to use this tip much in this class, but it is a tip I need to utilize in the future. 

Image by Steve Dinn

"Spelling Corrections" by Unknown
Wikimedia

Image by Opensource.com

Storytelling week 2: The Day the Earth Washed Away

As I sat in the sun one afternoon, I felt the Earth tremble and shake, and a loud rumbling noise. I was so confused. I looked at my husband, Deucalion, in confusion, and that same confused look was returned to me. Suddenly, we noticed the water levels rising drastically. Immediately, we got into our fishing boat and waited to see what would happen. We watched as the water levels raised to a point that not even the trees were visible. We are still uncertain how high the waters became, but we know they reached the top of Mount Parnassus, where we eventually landed.

No matter where we looked, nothing was the same as before. Dolphins swam around tree branches, seals played alongside our boat, and fish could be seen jumping from the water. The fate of the land animals was perhaps the saddest. We watched many animals float past us, desperately trying to swim, just to disappear beneath the water to their doom. Birds flew as long as they could before they succumbed to their exhaustion and plummeted into the water, giving up. Finally, after what seemed like a lifetime, Deucalion and I landed atop Mount Parnassus, the only piece of land in sight.

As we sat, awestruck, unsure of what was to come, we began praying together.
          
“Please, Gods of the mountains, nymphs both far and wide, Themis, spare us” I said.

“Gods, who are all-knowing, see our loyalty and struggle, and guide us to do what is right and to    help in your mysterious plan!” proclaimed Deucalion.

We prayed for what seemed like hours. Finally, the Gods heard our cries and we hear a musical sound, followed by the water levels dropping. Finally, we can see the ground again. Deucalion turns to me and says,

“What would you have done if only you had been spared? I could not live my life without you, and would have followed you into the sea. Thank the Gods, we were both spared and neither of us was forced to deal with the fear and isolation by ourselves.”

I could feel his love for me in that moment. However, this feeling was quickly replaced with fear when I came to the realization that we were the only humans left on Earth. We made our way to the temple of Themis. Upon arriving, we saw the damage left from the flood. Her temple was covered in slime and debris, and her altar had no fire. We were overcome with our love of the Gods, and Deucalion and I fell to the ground, kissing it from happiness, and prayed to Themis.

Together, we begged,

“Themis, gentle, caring, and understanding Goddess, please tell us how we may repair our home and our race. Please, bring help to us, Themis, in the hardest of times!”

A voice from above gently told us to,

“Leave the temple and with veiled heads and loosened clothes, throw behind you the bones of your great mother!”

My husband looked at me in disbelief, and I looked back at him. We were in shock for quite some time, but eventually, I broke the silence.

“Deucalion, I cannot scatter my mother’s bones because I do not want to offend or disturb her spirit.”

After a while, Deucalion comforted me,
“Either this ides is wrong, or, since oracles are godly and never urge evil, our grate mother must be the earth: I think the bones she spoke about are stones in the body of earth. It is these we are told to throw behind us.”

Although completely unsure of our mission, my husband and I descend from the temple with our heads covered and loosened clothes, just as Themis told us to do. Finally, staring hopefully at one another, Deucalion and I threw stones behind us.

Unbelievably, we watched as the rocks became soft, grew in size, and reformed themselves into human beings. The rocks which I threw were transformed into women, while the rocks my husband threw transformed into men. If I had not seen it myself, I would not believe this to be possible. That day will be forever etched in my memory.



Author’s note:
I chose to tell the story of Deucalion and Pyrrha, from Pyrrha’s point of view. This story is the one that hit me the hardest when I read it, and I thought it would be interesting told from Pyrrha’s point of view. I actually followed the original story as I wrote this, but added some details of my own to relate it to Pyrrha. I did use some of the exact quotes from the story, You can find the original story at the link below.

Bibliography:
Ovid’s Metamorphoses translated by Tony Kline (2000).



"Deucalion and Pyrrha Praying
before the Statue of the Goddess Themis"
by Jacopo Tinteretto
Wikimedia
"The Flood" by Leon Comerre
Wikipedia






"The Flood" by Paul Merwart.
Wikimedia


"The Deluge" by John Martin, 1834.
Wikipedia
"Flood" by Gustave Dore
Wikipedia

Tuesday, August 26, 2014

Week 2: Ovid's Metamorphoses (Books 1-4)

Deucalion and Pyrrha:

I was surprised that the Gods would release a flood and allow it to destroy their temples on Earth. The imagery of a sea without a shore is terrifying. All of the land animals dying and birds landing in the water from exhaustion. If an animal was spared, it dies slowly of starvation. I am particularly sensitive to animals, and this story really bothered me. I got very vivid images from the suffering of these animals, and didn’t like it one bit. Deucalion and his wife prayed to their Gods, who are the ones that brought this upon them. I thought it was sweet Deucalion asked how she would have felt/what she would have done to deal with the fear if he had not been spared, but she survived. I also thought him saying he would follow her into the sea was cute. Although she is devout, Pyrrha refuses to follow the God-dess’s (Themis’s) orders, fearing she would offend her mother’s spirit by scattering her bones. Deuca-lion and Pyrrha determined that Thermis meant stones from the earth, and went to follow her orders. The rocks became soft and eventually turned into human figures before their eyes. Men created by the rocks thrown by Deucalion and women from Pyrrha, repopulating the earth. 

Io:

Rape was disturbing. Jupiter turned her into a cow. Juno is smart enough to know that she is either wrong or being wronged, which I thought was clever. Io was given to Juno as a sacrifice and was constantly watched by Argus, a man with 100 eyes. I felt bad that she drank water from muddy streams and had no arms with which to beg for freedom. When she tried to complain, she was shocked to hear a strange noise. Io went to the riverbank and saw her reflection. She showed her father what happened to her by drawing the story in the dirt with her hoof. Jupiter sent someone to kill Argus. I loved Mercury saying, “the light of your many eyes is extinguished”. Very poetic. I LOVE how the peacock got its tail. Juno took Argus’s eyes and set them into the feathers and filled the tail with star-like jewels. 

Phaethon and Sun:

Epaphus was friends with Phaethon, child of the Sun. Pheathon was offended when Epaphus said he was not the descendant of a God. The seasons are represented as women in his father’s temple? \Phaethon asked to have his father’s chariot and winged horses for one day. The God of Sun refused to give Phaethon this favor because he is a mortal, and this request is not for a mortal. He goes on to tell Phaethon that not even Jupiter has the ability to ride in the chariot of fire. He will not give a gift to his son that is sure to kill him. 

Phaethon’s Ride:

Phoebus tried very hard to talk his son out of borrowing the chariot, but Phaethon demanded to drive the chariot, despite his father’s warnings. The chariot is described brilliantly: an axle of gold, a gold chariot pole, wheels with golden rims, circles of silver spokes, and crystals and gemstones glowed all over. The story mentions Lucifer the morning star, is this at all related to the Lucifer from the bible? Phoebus pleads with his son to follow his previous paths so as not to scorch the heavens or earth. Al-most immediately, the horses take off and leave the pre-ordained track. Phaeton now does not know what to do, and h wishes he would have followed his father’s advice and not taken the chariot. I applied this to my everyday life because there are many things I wish I would have listened to my parents before making a mistake.  Because of his inability to control the horses, the earth burned. Great cities and nations were demolished, along with all of nature. 

The Death of Phaethon:

Jupiter aimed one lightning bolt at Phaethon, removed him from the chariot, and took his life. Phaethon left a trail in the air, much like a shooting star. I thought that imagery was poetic and beautiful, despite the negative aspect of what had occurred. Phaethon’s sisters turn into trees. They cry for their mother, as all that is left is their mouths. Their mother tries to pull bark and branches of, but blood is left in the wound. I found this part very disturbing. Could you imagine if trees bled when we peeled their bark? Phaethon’s brother, Cycnus, began grieving for his brother and sisters. As he did, he turned into a swan. He did not trust Jupiter, so he deliberately stayed in water than on ground, where fire could reach him. After reading this, I have never seen a swan out of water, which makes this a kind of interesting logic behind that. Phoebus wants Jupiter to know that anyone who does not have the strength to rule the horses does not deserve to be killed. Phoebus rounds up his horses, and whips them because he blames them for his son’s death. Animal cruelty bothers me. 

Callisto:

What is with Jupiter and raping ever woman he thinks is attractive? Jupiter impersonated Diana, Goddess of the Hunt and the leader of Callisto. Diana spies Callisto, and shouts at her. Callisto runs, fearing it is again Jupiter in a disguise. She sees the other nymphs, and decides to go back, certain Diana and the other nymphs can sense her guilt. She went with the other nymphs to bathe, but it was discovered she was pregnant. She gave birth to a boy, which is when Juno decided to punish her. Juno told Callisto she would take her shape, because it pleased her husband so much. She then grabbed her by her hair and held her face to the ground until Callisto had transformed into a bear. I don’t like how Juno is so incredibly violent, when all of these have been Jupiter’s fault. On her son, Arca’s, 15th birthday Callisto found him. As her son pulled a spear back, aiming at his own mother’s chest, Jupiter pulled both from the earth and turned them into the constellations Great Bear and Little Bear.

Semele:

Semele is pregnant with Jupiter’s child. I wonder if she was raped. Juno goes to Semele’s threshold, disguised as an old woman. She tells Semele to demand Jupiter prove his love by assuming all of his powers before he embraces her. Jupiter, wishing he could take back his promise to do anything for her, does this. She is unable to handle his true form, as she is a mortal. She is consumed in fire and her fetus is taken from her womb. The fetus was sewn to Jupiter’s leg to complete his growth, then given to his aunt during infancy. Finally, he was raised by the nymphs of Mount Nysa, hidden in a cave. 

Echo:


Bacchus (Semele and Jupiter’s son) was “twice-born”. He was originally in his mother’s womb, then on Jupiter’s thigh after his mother died. I hadn’t heard the story of Venus being turned from one gender to another for hitting a pair of snakes. This was odd to me. Juno made Echo only able to speak the last few words of someone else, never speak for herself. She took her voice because Echo used to hold her in conversation while the other nymphs escaped after being with Jupiter. She was so embarrassed when Narcissus denied her that she stays out of sight hidden in lonely caves. I thought this was particularly sad and disconcerting. 

Narcissus:


I was pleased when he suffered from unrequited love, because he is the one who doomed Echo to this fate. How could he refuse to eat or sleep and just stare at himself? Also, how could he stare that long and not realize that everything he does, the reflection is also doing? How does he suddenly realize he is in love with himself? I thought it was touching that Echo stayed with him until the end, and even echoed his pain. Narcissus literally died of being heartbroken, along with starving and sleep deprivation. However, I think that the story means he died of a broken heart. 

The Story of Pyramus and Thisbe:


This story has so many similarities to Shakespeare’s Romeo and Juliet. Origin of mulberry color? Interesting. I like that the mulberries are dark because they are in mourning over their deaths. I thought it was nice that this sad story ended on a happy note when their parents decided to bury them together.

Mars and Venus:


I wonder why Sol is the first God to see anything that goes on. Is this symbolic? It is amazing to me how badly the Gods overreact. For example, Vulcan traps his wife and her lover in bed and lets all the other Gods in to witness this. He publicly shamed her, which is despicable. 

Perseus and Andromeda:


I had never heard that Medusa’s blood spawns snakes, how terrifying! Perseus is rude and abuses his power. Perseus demands to marry Andromeda after saving her from a sea monster. 

Perseus and Medusa:



Part of this story talks about when Perseus sets Medusa’s head on the ground. Somehow, Medusa’s head is able to turn anything it looks at to stone. Coral is said to have come from nymphs using Medusa’s head to harden seeds and throw them in the oceans. I thought the story of Medusa’s death was much more exciting. Perseus simply cut her head off in her sleep, there was no battle. I also didn’t know that Pegasus is born from Medusa. 






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Friday, August 22, 2014

Week 1: Storybook Favorites

Week 1: Storybook Favorites

I found many storybooks that I was interested in. I picked the first five that I really thought I would love after reading the introductions.

The first one I found was Constellation Stories: Facts or Myths?. I liked this story because I think astrology is really interesting, and it discusses stories of different astrological signs. I love the background and design of the website. It was a beautiful background picture and went really well with the subject matter. I want to have a website that incorporates my topic into the design.

Next, I found Deeper into the Forest of the Brothers Grimm, which interests me because my little sister loves the Brothers Grimm. I think I would enjoy the stories from the things she has told me previously. Plus, I could share this story with her!

Additionally, Nursery Rhymes Gone Wrong was interesting to me. It first caught my attention because of the terrifying-looking doll on the main page. I read the introduction and immediately thought I would like this storybook. I love the “after ever after” type of stories. So, I will definitely go back and read this one.

An honorable mention was The Tales of Pooh and Friends. I actually read the introduction and one of the stories for this one because it was so cute. I thought the website was really well set up and had excellent use of pictures. I just loved the stories the author used, and I loved that she tied those stories into the story of Winnie the Pooh.

Finally, A Dog's Afterlife caught my attention because it used Dante’s Inferno for the story backbone. I love Dante’s Inferno and think it is so interesting and dark at the same time. At first, I thought this inferred that the dog went to Hell, but it mentions him going to Paradise. I wouldn’t have read it if the dog went to Hell because All Dogs Go to Heaven. Plus, my dog passed away almost a year ago and that would have made me sad. However, I do intend on reading the rest of this story. Dante’s Inferno is interesting enough, but I think this version will be particularly interesting because it is from a dog’s point of view.

Thursday, August 21, 2014

Week 1: Introduction

Picture of my sister and I white water rafting in Wyoming this summer. Photo taken by River Runners. But, I bought it and it isn't copyrighted, so it is mine now. 


Hello! My name is Linzee Manor and I am 20 years old. I will turn 21 in November. I was born and raised around the Tulsa area and have lived in Owasso for 10 years. Going to college is the first time I have lived away from my family.

 I am an OU football fan and a Denver Broncos fan, born and raised. If it is Sunday and the Broncos are on, you will not be able to get in touch with me for a couple hours. 










I graduated high school in 2012. Now, I am a Sociology/Criminology major at the University of Oklahoma. I am graduating in only 3 years. However, after college, I actually want to go through med school and eventually become a surgeon. I will be taking the prerequisites at local colleges by my hometown so I can live near my family again. My ultimate dream is to be a plastic/reconstructive surgeon and do charity work with military organizations like the Wounded Warriors Project. 

Currently, I am a resident advisor in the Cate Center residence hall. I also babysit quite a bit. My two favorite things in the world are kids and animals. I love all animals, including the scaly ones. There is nothing that makes me happier than being around kids or animals and being out in nature. I love to play video games and craft, but I also love outdoor activities like fishing and camping. 

I have an older half-brother and a younger sister. My brother’s name is Nathan and he is ten years my senior. My sister’s name is Lexee and she is 16 years old, 4 years younger than me. My mother’s name is Renee, which is where I get my middle name, and my father’s name is Tom.
My sister Lexee and I in South Dakota this summer. 
My sister Lexee and I at my high school graduation. 
My brother Nathan and his wife Kayla. 

My daddy and I during a Dad's Day game. 
My mom and I in my senior pictures.




















 I have 2 dogs. My oldest dog’s name is Callie. She is almost 9 years old. She is a Catahoula Leopard breed, which are bred to hunt razorbacks. However, she is the mildest, sweetest dog you will ever meet. We used to have a Weimaraner named Boo, but she passed away last September at the age of 10. On May 31st, I adopted a new puppy. He will be 4 months old on the 31st of this month (August). He is a Jack Russell/Rat Terrier mix whose name is Milo. He is adorable. Callie and Milo look like opposites because Callie is black with some white spots, and Milo is white with black spots.
Boo, my (unfortunately) deceased weimaraner. 
Callie, the catahoula leopard. 
Milo, my new puppy!

If you have any questions, feel free to ask! I would love to meet all of you. Feel free to add me on facebook. If you search my name, I am the first one to pop up, possibly the only one. Haha. I can't wait to see what this semester has to bring and check out everyone's creative minds in action.



Week 1 Overview

Instead of choosing individual stories, I chose to select different units that I think will be of most interest to me. I chose them for a variety of reasons outlined below (in no particular order):

Selection 1:
I think one of the most interesting to me will be the Middle East Unit. I study Arabic here at the University of Oklahoma and really enjoy the culture and the legends. I took an Arab Culture class last semester that was based on literature that was interesting, but I think this will be much more fun.

Selection 2:
 Another unit I think will be most interesting is the European Unit. My ancestors were primarily European, so it will be interesting to become more accustomed to their myths and legends. I am currently obsessed with Dante’s Inferno, which is in this unit. I just started reading Dante’s Inferno this summer, but am very excited to further my reading in this class. I also really adore the Brothers Grimm and Hans Christian Anderson, which happen to be in this section, as well.

Selection 3:
Perhaps one of the most exciting units to me is the Classical Unit. I have always been obsessed with Greek and Roman mythology, and this unit has stories that I remember researching and learning about from my adolescence. This might be my favorite unit before we even start because I love Greek and Roman history so much.

Selection 4:

A unit that I have a newfound interest for is the Biblical Units. I was baptized almost 3 years ago and accepted Jesus into my life almost 4 years ago. I am still very new in my faith, and haven’t been active in church since I was baptized. I have a great interest in biblical stories, though. I particularly am interested in stories about saints and their role in mythology and folklore. So, this unit will be very interesting for me. 

Wednesday, August 20, 2014

Week 1 Storytelling: The Haunted Castle


Once Upon a Time..... 





Rachel decided to go on vacation one day, and decided she wanted to rent a cabin in the middle of the woods in order to get away from all of the stresses surrounding her everyday life. As she sat in front of the fire minding her own business, she heard a noise off in the distance. At first, she hesitated, but she soon looked out the window to investigate. She saw nothing, but still heard noises, so she grabbed her binoculars and looked out the window once more. She then saw the crazy axe man that she had heard about in the news coming towards her cabin!


She threw her shoes on and ran out the door as fast as she could. She ran northeast toward the closest town. She probably ran for miles before stopping to take a rest in a group of trees, where she was decently protected. She had finally caught her breath when she turned around to keep heading to town, and spotted an escaped convict about 30 feet away from her. The escaped convict hadn’t seen her until she stood up and leaves crunched underneath her feet. As soon as he saw her, he froze and stared at her for what felt like a lifetime. Suddenly, he ran towards her, like he was going to attack, but instead her ran immediately past her and continued running towards the axe man.

 Shaken, Rachel returned to her journey and began heading for the closest town. She kept walking until it was almost nightfall. Panicking, she began running to find shelter. She came upon an empty field where there was nothing except a very plain building in the center. She entered the building and sat on a bench inside. She finally had a moment to sit down and relax. She sat, breathing and listening to the silence. She sat like that for quite some time before finally leaning her head back onto the wall. However, when her head fell against the wall, she felt something next to her head. When she moved away, something fell on top of her. It was a skeleton! She realized she was in an unmarked graveyard. As soon as she realized what had happened, she fled faster than she ever had before and kept running toward town.

 It was about 20 minutes from nightfall when she finally reached a house. This house was old looking and very ornate. It had ivy framing the outside edges and gorgeous bay windows. There was a faint light coming from inside. Rachel knocked on the door, but no one answered. She peered in the windows, but the house appeared to be abandoned. She went back to the front door in hopes that it would be unlocked and pushed the door open. The inside of the house was even more beautiful, but in an eerie way. She looked around for someone in the house and even yelled asking if anyone was there. She received no answer, but felt as if she was being watched. She decided to find a bedroom to sleep in for the night, feeling assured that the axe man had not followed her this far. As she was laying down waiting to fall asleep, she heard footsteps outside of her door, but when she went to look, there was no one there. She laid back down and had almost closed her eyes when a shadow flashed past her door. Again, she saw no one outside in the hallway.


As she lay back down, she saw the glow of eyes in the corner and heard breathing…..


To be continued….








Author’s Note:
For the purposes of this story, I used the following motifs: Haunted castle, graveyard, axe man, and escaped convict. I thought this story would be fun because it is completely made up by me, rather than recreated from another story. I chose these items because they are in line with the character going northeast toward town and I felt they fit into my story really well. I chose the name Rachel because I have a long-time friend named Rachel who loves to tell stories.

Bibliography:
Map  Tom Gauld
Axe Man  Clipart
Convicts  Wikimedia
Mausoleum  Wikimedia
Haunted house  Deviant Art
Scary eyes  Flickr


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Tuesday, August 19, 2014

Week 1: My Favorite Places


My favorite place is the mountains. I have been to Yellowstone National Park and was able to go up through the mountains there. I also have family up in Wyoming, and that is where I have spent the most time in the mountains. I love the mountains because they are so peaceful and relaxing. Camping in the mountains is so much better than camping in Oklahoma. I personally took all of these pictures this summer while I was on vacation in Wyoming and Yellowstone. My dad is from Sheridan, Wyoming which is also one of my favorite places, and these mountains are very close to there.